Please, just hear me out, Naruto cried.
Hinatas eyes widened.
I
I love you.
Hinata mouthed his words, breathless.
I dont care how you feel about Sasuke, Naruto said shakily, This is how I feel, and thats never going to change. I love you, Sakura-chan.
Sakuras eyes dropped to the ground.
Im sorry, Naruto, she said with an eerie calm that seemed to settle on the surroundings like a blanket of cold.
Hinatas eyes narrowed at the pink-haired girl. Would she deny him yet again?
Sakura
Naruto whispered.
Naruto, hes coming back! I know he is
Sakura broke off, tears welling up in her eyes, he will
he will
he will
Her sobs caught in her throat like a broken record, making her repeat those two hopeful but futile words.
Hinata sighed. She knew that Sakura would not let go of Sasuke so easily, but to hurt Naruto in the process did not seem necessary to Hinata.
Saukra-chan
Naruto whispered again, he will come back. Ill bring him home. Ill drag him back to Konoha if it would make you happy
Naruto, dont try to, Sakura began.
Dont try to what, Sakura? Sasuke doesnt give a damn about us anymore! Naruto paused, realizing the hurtful words he had just uttered. S-Sakura, I didnt mean that
No
its okay, Naruto, Sakura whispered, I know youve never really liked Sasuke to begin with
No! Naruto grabbed Sakuras hand abruptly, It isnt that
he lives the life of an avenger. He has chosen a path that does not involve love
Sakura ripped her hand from his grip, Oh, what will you say next, Naruto? That he doesnt know how to love?
Hinata watched as Narutos eyes glistened moistly, He cannot love, he said sadly, not as he is. And he isnt about to change.
Sakura had all but cried a river by this time. She stumbled forward into Narutos arms. He put them around her lovingly.
Sakura
Ill always be here for you
he whispered.
I know
she sobbed, gripping him tighter.
Hinatas eyes widened further. The sight was too much for her. Why? Why was Sakura changing her mind now? Why, when Hinata was so close? Hinata loved Naruto more than that pathetic kunoichi ever could
more than anyone ever
ever
A hand reached up and covered her eyes, while another wrapped itself gently around her waist, pulling her away.
Hinata was too frightened to move or even speak. What if Naruto discovered that she had been eavesdropping?
What would he think of her?
You shouldnt have to see that, a familiar voice sighed.
Ne
Neji nii-san? she whispered.
Almost as concurrence to her question, the hand was removed from her eyes and went to her cheek. Neji spun her to face him. Her face caught in the crook of his hand, he rubbed his thumb gently against her pale cheek.
Something in his eyes, his startling white eyes, caught her attention.
Neji nii-san
are you? she said in a tone barely more than a whisper.
Neji cleared his throat softly and blinked away the remnants of his tears. No, Hinata-sama, he muttered.
N-Neji-san
Hinata breathed as he stroked her face, from the forehead, to the cheek, to the chin, and down to the neck, W-what are you
?
Youre so pale, Neji murmured, not seeming to hear her. Without warning, he pulled her in close.
A warm embrace.
What are you doing, Neji-san? Hinata choked out.
I am protecting you, Hinata-sama, Neji whispered into her ear, As I always have, and always will.














Comments
Writing Advice: Where is this taking place? Where are Naruto and Sakura, and where is Hinata watching from? I'm guessing she's somewhere where they don't notice her, but she can see and hear them, but where? When exactly is this taking place? We know it's after Sasuke defected, but how long after? Before Naruto left to train with Jiraiya, or possibly after? The emotional interactions between the characters are strong, but location-wise they're floating in a void.
Minor Nitpicks: Naruto has a very rough, casual speaking style. He wouldn't say "he has" or "cannot," but instead "he's" or "can't." The phrase "almost as concurrence to" should be "almost in concurrence with," though even corrected that might sound a little too formal.
Now I'm putting my Inner Editor back to sleep. When it comes to pairings involving these characters, I'm definitely a NaruHina person, because it wins at cute.
Suckura...
Mind if I borrow that?
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Sometimes life hands you lemons...But I'm allergic to lemons.
On the road of life, don't pick up hitch hikers.
-Aoina Quotes
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Not gonna raichu a love song.
*wipes tear away*
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Not gonna raichu a love song.
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"'Die, mortal!' Oh, did I do good, Temari?! I'll make cookies for us! And I'll use sugar this time! Not sand! Unless you want sand? No? Then, sugar it is!"
Srsly, she and Sassy deserve one another.
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Not gonna raichu a love song.
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